雅思写作范文：高水平运动员拥有高收入公平吗
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各位考鸭们，春天好啊，最近的两会探讨了不少收入差距大和社会资源再分配的问题。这也引起了大家对于高收入运动员们的热烈讨论。除了拥有强健的体魄和卓越的运动细胞，这些运动员们还有万贯家财，大家是不是又羡慕又嫉妒呢?
successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justifies while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
这篇文章是剑桥雅思6中的考官例文。对于双边讨论的题型，考官采取了引出话题-讨论双方论点-自己观点的行文结构：
第一段：回应题目指出如今存在运动员们如明星般拥有着高收入。
第二段：指出那些认为这类现象合理的观点以及原因。
第三段：指出那些认为该现象不合理的原因。
最后一段：回应题目，引出自己的观点以及总结全文。
在写作中间段时大家一定要据理说明，可采取: topic sentence – idea – explain – example的写法将内容不断扩充。
As a result of(由于)constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant (奢侈的)lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons (外科医生)or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined (决定)by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sports in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion (概念) of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.
Those who feel that sports starts’ salaries are justified(合理的) might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication (奉献)a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. They pressure from the media is intense (强烈的) and there is little privacy out of the spotlight (聚光灯). So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.
Personally, I think that the amount of (形容不可数的数量)money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential (基本的)professions and achievements.
绿色部分是7-9分词汇和词组，是大家值得背诵和模仿的表达。大家可以不断借鉴，最终运用到自己的作文中去～祝大家早日与雅思分手～
作者简介：胡冲，宁波新东方留学考试中心英联邦写作老师;教授课程:雅思写作，CI初级课程，澳洲同步课程VCE阅读和写作
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