雅思大作文7分范文及解析:更换工作和住所的利弊
利弊类大作文,工作类话题
An increasing number of people change their career and places of residence several times during their life. Is it a positive or negative development?
题目来源:2017年9月16日大陆雅思大作文
1题目大意
越来越多人们一生中更换几次职业和住所,这是一个积极还是消极发展呢?
2思路解析
这是一道利弊类考题,讨论的是更换职业和住所的利弊问题。利弊类文章,需要强调在论证上体现合理性,即在具体的分析中,明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边,或是利弊均等,而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量,而是内容是否有说服力。题目不难理解,但审题要注意到题目提到了“career”和“places of residence”,因此需要分别进行论证。下面月半鸭和大家来看下具体观点~
首先来分别看下好处。
更换工作的好处有两方面。一是换工作对于当事人来说可能是个难得的机会。如果新工作给出工资回报更高或职级更高,那意味着当事人能有一个更好的发展前景或享受更好的生活,抓住这样的机会是有利的。二是一份新的工作可能能让人学习到新的技能,丰富当事人的知识面和见识,这对于提升其竞争力以及未来发展会有所帮助。
更换住所同样有两个,一是让人有机会体验到不同风格的住所和不同地区的文化风俗。不一样的环境可能会让人产生新鲜感,而新住所如果更加宽敞且周围基础设施更加健全,那能够让人感到更加舒适和满意。二是如果新住所离公司更近,那也能够减少上下班的通勤时间,提高人们的便利度。
然后我们再来看坏处。
首先,更换职业和住所,意味着当事人要面临一个陌生环境及其会带来的挑战。由于缺少充足的接触时间,当事人可能没法和邻居及工作伙伴相互了解和建立良好关系,而一旦遇到问题这可能会陷入孤立无援的状态。其次,人们多次更换职业且新工作和就旧工作没有关联性的话,意味着其之前的经验和人脉大概率都变得不再有用,相较于那些经验更丰富且有着更广泛的业内人脉关系的老员工来说,似乎并不具备职场上的竞争力。
不过,如果更换工作和住所对于一个人的未来发展是更好的机会,那么这些冒这些风险是值得的(利>弊)
3提纲
4高分范文示例
Many people today tend to have a varied job history and also move to different places during the course of their lives. This can advance their career although sometimes it is difficult to maintain their relationships with friends and neighbours.
People who change jobs or move house from time to time may become well-rounded and knowledgeable, since they can meet new friends and acquire a great variety of skills. For example, they may work for a multinational company, where they can improve language skills with the help of colleagues from other countries. The new employer may use a different computer system, allowing them to upgrade their computer skills. With such skills and experience, these people can handle complex problems more easily and gain more opportunities for career progression.
Another reason why people make career changes or move to a new home is that they intend to experience different cultures and lifestyles. They may enjoy working in companies which place importance on teamwork, because they can work closely with supportive colleagues to achieve targets. It is also interesting to live in a neighbourhood where they can gain access to facilities to do exercise regularly, and amenities such as clubs, pubs and cinemas for different social activities. By embracing these changes, many people can live a colourful and rewarding life.
On the other hand, people may have difficulty maintaining a strong relationship with friends or neighbours, if they do not have a steady job or live in a place for a long time. The lack of communication with colleagues or those living the next door can be a problem because they do not visit each other or eat a meal together. They cannot cope with stress easily due to the fact that they cannot take advice from others or share their feelings with others. They are not close and do not have a sense of community.
In conclusion, moving to another place or working for another company is a good choice for people in terms of career advancement. On the negative side, it is not easy to create a closely-knit community if everybody leads a nomadic life.
范文作者:耿洪刚
5相关词汇和语法结构
advance career 前程
well-rounded and knowledgeable 知识渊博
Upgrade computer skills 提升电脑技能
Amenities 便利设施
a closely-knit community 紧密联系的社区
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