雅思5.28笔试写作真题解析+高分范文
雅思5.28笔试写作真题解析+高分范文
话题分类
社会话题
雅思大作文题目
The use of cars and motorcycles causes transportation difficulty in cities. Why do people continue to use cars and motorcycles in cities? What is the best way to solve this problem?
写作思路
城市交通状况不佳,为什么很多人会选择开车?主要和城市公共交通不发达有关。自己开车不需要等车和转车,更加方便灵活。如果要让大家减少开车,需要完善公共交通网络。具体措施包括优化公交和地铁线路,增加公交和地铁班次,对于短距离出行,鼓励大家骑行,提供共享单车。如果使用公共交通更快更方便,而且价格便宜,那么更多的人就会放弃开私家车。
参考范文
Although poor traffic has become a problem in cities, many people still choose to drive cars or ride motorcycles. I think the important reason behind this phenomenon is that private cars and motorcycles give people more freedom and flexibility in travelling.
When people take the bus, they need to follow the regular schedule and in some areas where buses are few, passengers need to wait a long time at the bus station. What is worse is that in many cases there is no direct transit between the place of departure and the destination, which means travellers have to change one or more times, wasting a large amount of time on the road and perhaps becoming tired and frustrated. By driving their own cars, people would no longer worry about these problems.
Considering the heavy traffic in most cities, it is essential to take effective measures to reduce the car use. The best way to reach the aim is to improve the public transit system in a comprehensive manner and provide residents with multiple choices of transport that are convenient, punctual and affordable. The authorities need to upgrade the transport networks that incorporate buses, subways and even bicycles.
To encourage people to ride bicycles within a short distance, bicycle lanes should be marked and perhaps shared bicycles can be provided. To reduce passengers’ waiting time for public transit and the number of transfers in the journey, more buses and trains need to be added and the route should be optimized. If taking the bus and subway were faster and more convenient than driving private cars, more city dwellers would give up their own cars and take the public transport.
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重点词汇/语料
flexibility 灵活性
regular schedule 固定时间表
direct transit 直达交通
place of departure 出发地
destination 目的地
reach the aim 达到目的
comprehensive manner 综合性的方式
multiple 多种的
punctual 准时的
affordable 支付得起的
authorities 有关部门
upgrade 提高、完善
incorporate 结合
public transit 公共交通
transfer 转车
optimize 优化
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