雅思写作(20221022)│噪音增多:原因and解决
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今天带来的是雅思写作高分范文学习笔记,选自机经真题。
本期我们来看看社会类话题
The level of noise around us is constantly increasing, and is affecting the quality of our lives.
What cause the noise?
What should be done about it?
(我们周围的噪音水平在不断增加,并影响着我们的生活质量。是什么原因引起的噪音?我们该怎么做呢?)
问题:噪音增多的原因和解决方法
你可以给出哪些观点?
看完本期内容,你会有答案~
In one word, it is impossible to live in a complete quiet environment in today's cities, but it is crucial that disturbing noises should be restricted for the sake of citizens’ well-being.
接下来,我们来分析范文的结构及观点。
【介绍】In recent years, it has been more commonly recognized that noise is increasing sharply and becoming a daily disturbance. This can be attributed to the higher density of population in urban surroundings and the concomitant human activities. In order to solve the annoying problem, governments can turn to the power of legislation and regulation, as well as promoting proper individual acts.
参考译文:近年来,人们越来越普遍地认为,噪音正在急剧增加,并成为一种日常干扰。这可以归因于城市环境中的人口密度较高和伴随而来的人类活动。为了解决这一恼人的问题,政府可以诉诸于立法和监管的权力,以及促进适当的个人行为。
【语料积累】daily disturbance日常干扰
【语料积累】be attributed to……
【语料积累】concomitant做名词表示伴随发生的事,作形容词concomitant + n. 同时发生或出现的某个具体的事
【语料积累】turn to…向…求助
【语料积累】proper individual acts适当的个人行为
【噪音原因】①As the root of the annoyance, urbanization has urged people to flock into cities, producing more goods and personal needs. ②With the expansion of cities, the number of vehicles surges, bringing about beeping, engine roaring and occasionally brake grinding. ③Besides, area like fairs, shopping complex and even factories are built where noises are inevitable from audio advertising and from manufacturing. ④To worsen the situation, night life in metropolises is required by stressed people and encouraged due to its economic effects, so the long opening hours, typically until late night, are continuously harassing nearby residents and jeopardizing their health.
【论点】As the root of the annoyance, urbanization has urged people to flock into cities, producing more goods and personal needs.
参考译文:作为烦恼的根源,城市化促使人们涌向城市,产生更多的商品和个人需求。
【语料积累】as the root of…作为…的根源
【语料积累】urge sb. to flock into sw. 促使某人涌向某地
【人多车多】②With the expansion of cities, the number of vehicles surges, bringing about beeping, engine roaring and occasionally brake grinding.
参考译文:随着城市的扩张,车辆数量激增,带来哔哔声,发动机轰鸣,和偶尔地制动磨削。
【语料积累】surge激增
【语料积累】beep(汽车喇叭、电话答录机等发出的)嘟嘟声,哔哔声
【语料积累】roar咆哮,engine roaring发动机轰鸣
【语料积累】brake刹车,grind磨碎,brake grinding制动磨削
【商业噪音】③Besides, area like fairs, shopping complex and even factories are built where noises are inevitable from audio advertising and from manufacturing.
参考译文:此外,像集市、购物中心甚至工厂这样的区域建造的地方,是无法避免音频广告和制造噪音的。
【语料积累】shopping complex购物中心
【语料积累】inevitable无法避免的
【夜生活】④To worsen the situation, night life in metropolises is required by stressed people and encouraged due to its economic effects, so the long opening hours, typically until late night, are continuously harassing nearby residents and jeopardizing their health.
参考译文:更糟糕的是,大都市的夜生活是压力大的人需要的,并由于其经济影响而受到鼓励,所以长时间开放,通常直到深夜,持续骚扰附近的居民,危及他们的健康。
【语料积累】metropolis大都市,metropolitan大都市的
【语料积累】harass nearby residents骚扰
【语料积累】jeopardize health危及健康
【噪音解决】①Authorities are obliged and they are the only party able to attend to this pressing issue in several ways. ②A set of laws, rules and adaptations would be set up to limit cars and business. The traffic in certain regions and hours should be limited. For instance, large and special vehicles are excluded in residential areas after working hours: tooting and sirens in downtown areas are not allowed despite emergency; sound barriers and green belts between road and neighborhoods can be put up. ③In regard to business districts, it is administrative regulations that enables officers and inhabitants nearby to supervise and report the illegal actions like excessive volume and working hours.
【论点】Authorities are obliged and they are the only party able to attend to this pressing issue in several ways.
参考译文:政府有义务,他们是唯一能够以几种方式处理这一紧迫问题的一方。
【语料积累】be obliged有义务的
【语料积累】be the only party able to do sth. 是唯一能够做某事的一方
【语料积累】attend to sth. 处理
【语料积累】pressing issue紧迫问题
【车辆限流】②A set of laws, rules and adaptations would be set up to limit cars and business. The traffic in certain regions and hours should be limited. For instance, large and special vehicles are excluded in residential areas after working hours: tooting and sirens in downtown areas are not allowed despite emergency; sound barriers and green belts between road and neighborhoods can be put up.
参考译文:一套法律、规则和调整将被制定来限制汽车和商业活动。应限制某些地区的交通流量和工作时间。例如,工作时间之后,大型和特殊车辆被阻止进入居民区:尽管有紧急情况,但不允许在市中心地区鸣笛和拉警报;可以在道路和社区之间设置声障和绿化带。
【语料积累】adaptation适应,调整
【语料积累】be excluded in residential areas被阻止进入居民区
【语料积累】toot (汽车喇叭)发出嘟嘟声,tooting and sirens鸣笛和警报
【语料积累】sound barriers and green belts声障和绿化带
【商业监督】③In regard to business districts, it is administrative regulations that enables officers and inhabitants nearby to supervise and report the illegal actions like excessive volume and working hours.
参考译文:关于商业区,根据行政法规,使附近工作人员和居民能够监督和报告过量和超时工作等非法行为。
【语料积累】administrative regulation行政法规
【语料积累】supervise and report sth.监督和报告某事
【语料积累】excessive volume and working hours过量和超时工作
【总结】In one word, it is impossible to live in a complete quiet environment in today's cities, but it is crucial that disturbing noises should be restricted for the sake of citizens’ well-being.
参考译文:总之,在今天的城市中,我们不可能生活在一个完全安静的环境中,但为了公民的福祉,应该限制令人不安的噪音是至关重要的。
【语料积累】for the sake of …为了…,表示某个原因
综上所述,范文的结构是:开头段(介绍)+主体段一(原因=人多车多+商业噪声+夜生活)+主体段二(解决=车辆限流+商业监督)+ 结尾段(总结),这也是报告类写作的作文结构。
最后,看你是否能更自信地头脑风暴,用上今日所学,试一试:
噪音增多的原因和解决方法
(平时写作过程中,多用新积累的观点替换自己已有的观点,巩固吸收)
今天的讲解就到这里,希望能够启发你对噪音增多原因和解决方法的思考~
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