新闻资讯-雅思大作文7分范文及解析：线上教学替代传统面授

大学现在在提供证书通过远程培训而不是通过老师在教室中授课。你认为优点多还是缺点多？

这是一道利弊类大作文，讨论的是远程教学替代线下教学的利弊问题。利弊类文章需要强调在论证上体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。审题时注意两点，一是限定对象“Universities and colleges”，需要考虑大学的特性，比如一些专业课问题；二是题目包含比较关系，“distance learning”和“teachers in the classroom”，在论证过程中需要体现双方优劣势。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看在线教育替代面授课程优势，有三方面。

一是远程学习能提供更高的便捷性，即使身有残疾或居住偏远的人也可以通过线上教学完成大学教育。

二是学生学习的灵活性更高，如今不少大学生本身有全职工作或需要照顾家庭，线上教学使得他们有机会按照自己空余时间来完成学业，同时兼顾两边任务。

三是远程教学能帮助学校和学生节省更多费用，学校可以节约用于建造教室和宿舍的场地成本，而学生也无需支付额外的住宿费和生活费等。

然后来看这样做的弊端，同样有三方面。

一是许多专业课程在线教学的效果会大打折扣，特别是诸如医学、机械制造等需要线下实践教学的课程，在线很难完成同样的教学内容，学生的学习成果也难以保障。

二是线上教学不利于自控力差的学生，没有传统课堂环境的结构和支持，这些学生可能很难保持学习动力。在讲课过程中老师没法确保另一头学生是否真的在听讲还是在做别的事情，而线下则有更强的把控。

三是在线沟通效率低于面对面，不利于老师与学生以及学生与学生之间的互动。当学生听课产生疑问时，老师很难在线上立即获得反馈并进行解答。同学互相之间也难以加深认识并培养社区意识。

Education continues to be one of the most widely contested topics, especially with the emergence of online education and the fact that the world is undergoing major changes. Furthermore, there are many who contend that Internet-based distance learning can genuinely replace human teachers. However, in my opinion, there is no substitute for a genuine teacher. 

Teachers in the offline world are more adaptable in terms of instruction than their virtual counterparts. In light of the fact that computers can only function according to human-set programmes, they can only perform repetitive tasks. On the contrary, offline instructors are capable of adapting their teaching strategies to meet the demands of diverse student populations.

The second advantage of human teachers is that emotional and physical interactions between students and teachers can occur more effectively through face-to-face communication. In fact, teachers have a dual role: they need to both educate their students and serve as role models for them by imparting encouragement and inspiration through the stories of their own lives. So, in addition to being a source of information, teachers can also serve as examples of how to live one's life for their students. 

Despite its obvious shortcomings, Internet-based distance education is also a viable choice. The vast volume of information accessible online and the ease of access can be recognised as the advantages. Ultimately, learning on a computer is more time-and cost-efficient than studying in physical classrooms since it eliminates the necessity to commute. 

In conclusion, despite the massive amount of information and the obvious convenience of distant learning, I am still convinced of the advantages of human teachers, mostly owing to the adaptability and emotional exchanges made possible by face-to-face interaction.

范文作者：徐祎娇 & Sophia

Irreplaceable 不可取代的

Virtual 虚拟的

Counterpart 比较对象

Repetitive 重复性的

time-efficient and cost-efficient 省时省钱