雅思笔试写作真题外教范文|2月11日回忆版
2月11日雅思笔试写作真题外教范文回忆！
我的一位雅思写作学生，从5分提到了6分。
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教老师。今天，给大家带来一个2023年2月11日IELTS雅思大作文真题的原创范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
题目改述
观点类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
题目：
Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared with other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题：
Type: Opinion 观点类大作文 (我的观点：agree)
Body 1: more responsibility and more stress
Body 2: positions of leadership and more pressure
There is a school of thought that states senior executives and positions such as Chief Executive Officers of sizable companies and corporations should earn more than other staff members, an opinion I agree with for the following reasons.
One of the main reasons for why senior-level managers should earn greater incomes than regular employees is simply because of the responsibility they must bear. These responsibilities include being held accountable by stakeholders, having some form of liability for all decisions that affect a specific department or the whole company, and for performance numbers such as profit margins, productivity, and quality metrics, all of which are not within the purview of lower-level staff. Such obligations of guiding the company to expansive growth and maintaining or expanding revenue in the way of sales can weigh heavily on the minds of those charged with such duties, and as a consequence, higher remuneration than those with lesser responsibilities is only fair.
Another reason for paying senior management higher salaries, and for which is a factor that in some way is related to the above reason, is that these managers usually take on leadership roles of great importance. In a sense, these senior executives are designated with the role of leading and guiding other staff members within their scope, and that for some executives, such as COOs and CEOs, can even mean being responsible for the whole workforce of the company. Coupled with the education and experience many of these individuals have groomed themselves with, it again only seems suitable and wholly appropriate to reward them with greater monetary benefits than those in non-executive positions.
In conclusion, due to directors, chiefs, and senior managers having a great deal more responsibility than regular staff, and also including the fact these higher-ups have intense stress to handle from their leadership duties, it is my opinion that it is completely justifiable to pay them more than other positions that have a reduced pressure load.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:
Large companies = sizable companies and corporations
pay higher salaries = earn more than other
CEOs and executives = senior executives and positions such as Chief Executive Officers
compared with other workers = than other staff members
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文高分句型：
There is a school of thought that states
, an opinion I agree with for the following reasons.
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
and
such as
than other
, an opinion (appositive clause 同位语)
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
senior executives 高管
senior positions 高层
Chief Executive Officers 首席执行官
sizable 相当大的
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
more responsibility and more stress
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
One of the main reasons for why…is (simply) because of…
These… (2nd sentence)
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
senior level managers 高级管理人员
bear 担负
held accountable by 负责
stakeholders 参与方；利益相关方
liability (for) （法律上对某事物的）责任，义务
performance numbers 业绩数据
profit margins 利润
productivity 生产率
quality-metrics 品质标准
the purview of 职权范围
lower-level staff 底层员工
obligations 责任；义务
expansive growth 增长
expanding revenue 拓宽收入渠道
weigh heavily on 面临压力；沉重负担
charged with 负责
remuneration 报酬；薪水
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
is because of
simply
These
include being
, having
that affect
, and for
, all of which
Such
in the way of
those
, and as a consequence,
than those with lesser
- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
positions of leadership and more pressure
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
Another reason for…
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
Senior management 高管
Leadership roles 领导者
Designated with 指定
Scope 范畴
COO (Chief Operating Officer) 首席运营官
Workforce 全体员工
Groomed 培养；训练
Appropriate 合适的
Monetary benefits 金钱利益
Non-executive positions 非主管职位
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
, and for which
that in some way is related to the above reason
, is that these
usually take on
In this sense, these
within their
, and that for some
, such as
, can even mean being
Coupled with
themselves with,
it again only seems
them
greater
than those
- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
In conclusion,
, it is my opinion that
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
directors 负责人
chiefs 负责人
senior managers 高级经理
regular staff 普通职员
higher-ups 上司；上级
intense 紧张的
leadership duties 领导职责
justifiable 正当的；无可非议的
pressure load 压力；担子
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
, due to…having
more
than
, and also including the fact that these
their
that it
more than other
that
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