雅思写作！2023年雅思写作外教范文：你会写这样的地图对比类小作文
在日常学习、工作或生活中，大家总少不了接触作文或者范文吧，通过文章可以把我们那些零零散散的思想，聚集在一块。下面是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac给大家带来一个IELTS雅思地图对比类小作文的原创范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，Mac范文
3，范文朗读
4，范文解析
5，提分技巧
题目：
Overall, several changes (1)have been made to the parking lot, classroom configuration and the office, along with additional facilities being built.
In 1985, the car park was larger than now and rectangular, with a road running along its perimeter, whereas today’s car park is oval shaped, also with a road running along its outside, and additionally, in 1985 there was a smaller car park next to the office which has since disappeared. The office still exists in its original position, located on the (2)west side of the school; however, the library has been converted into a resource center, which includes a computer room, and is adjacent to newly built classrooms.
On the east side of the school grounds, the main classroom block has been increased to three stories from its original two stories, and another classroom building has additionally been added towards the south side. The field laying to the south of the school has been reduced in size and in place of half the field, a pool and fitness center have been erected.
The school has become modernized with the additions of the computer room, fitness center, and pool.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard phrases for IELTS Map diagrams 雅思地图类小作文地道表达积累：
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The maps show
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the changes made to
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between + year and (year/present day)
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Overall,
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several changes have been made
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original position
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has been converted into
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has additionally been added
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has been reduced in size
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in place of
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have been erected
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇:
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necessitated by 需要；必要
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configuration 布局；构造
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additional 额外的
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facilities 设施
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rectangular 长方形的
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running along 沿着
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perimeter 周长；边界
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oval shaped 椭圆形的
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disappeared 消失
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original position 先前的位置
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converted into 改造成
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adjacent 毗邻
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school grounds 学校场地
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erected 建造
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modernized 现代化
Cohesion (C&C words and phrases) 把这些简单的词用好，在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分：
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increasing by
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, along with
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larger than
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, with
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its
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; whereas,
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today’s
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, also with
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, and additionally,
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there
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smaller
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which has since
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; however,
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, which
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, and
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has been increased
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has become
-- 提分技巧 --
(1) As always, the verb tense is critical for your grammar score. In this map diagram, and in many like it, the comparison being made is between a time in the past and now. This means we need to use the Present Perfect Verb form.
(2) On diagrams such as this, we can consider the top of the diagram to be the ‘north side’. It is important to know your directions (left side is west, right side east, down side south), so that you can use these directions to indicate where items are located. These direction terms (north, west, east, south) are not capitalized.
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