雅思表格类小作文:如何才能拿到高分?
今天,给大家带来一个IELTS雅思地图对比类小作文的原创范文。
老规矩,以下是正文目录:
1,题目
2,解题思路
3,Mac范文+范文音频
4,范文解析
题目:
- 雅思范文解析 -
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The table displays 该表格展示了
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for the year
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Overall 总体来说
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the highest 最高的
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one of the highest 最高之一
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followed by 紧接着
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suggesting a relationship exists between (see notes) 反映了……和……之间的关系
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leading in 在……方面领先
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one of the lowest 最低之一
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on par with that of 与……持平
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sitting lower 比……低
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coming in second in 位居第二
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registered far higher in 比……高得多
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ranging from 从……(到……)
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surpassing the ___ mark (point) 超过……值
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sitting at 处于
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respectively 分别
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category 类别,种类
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reflected in 反映在
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similar to 与……相似
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GDP per capita 人均国内生产总值
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literacy rate 识字率
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spreadsheets (newspapers) 报纸
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South and Central American countries (see notes) 南美洲和中美洲国家
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economic output 经济产出
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statistic 数据
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reflected in 在……中体现
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key (indicator)(s) 关键指标
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category 种类,类别
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echoed in 在……中体现
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situation 情况,情形
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, in -
, for the -
Overall, -
the highest -
one of the highest -
, followed by -
, and which also -
, suggesting -
and having one of the lowest -
, with only -
, for which -
their -
the most of all -
second -
, also -
far higher -
this -
than the -
, ranging from -
Other than -
surpassing -
, only respectively -
the lowest -
, selling -
similar to -
whose -
only
-- Items to note --
(1)The question says“American”countries,when in reality these are South and Central American countries.Your knowledge permitting,if you know the proper or full name of something stated in the question,then go ahead and use it.
题目里写了American countries,通过看表格,具体指的是中美洲和南美洲国家。那么我们在写作的时候就要把South and Central American countries写出来。
(2)We do not want to state categorically(meaning‘absolutely’)a definitive observation,such as“there is a relationship between A and B”(unless it’s absolutely clear there is).But we can‘suggest’a relationship,in other words,pointing out to the reader the POSSIBILITY of some type of relationship.Our job is to‘observe’,and not‘interpret’,information,but we can show a'correlation'.
小作文的一个原则是相对性。
在展示literacy和economic output两者之间关系的时候,我没有用there is,因为is显得很绝对,而是用了suggesting a relationship exists between literacy and economic output。也就是说,指出有这种关系的可能性,而不是直截了当地陈述lieracy的比率高低和economic output是因果关系。
(3)By following a noun with a comma and then‘a’(an),allows us to further identify the noun.This is a common technique,called an‘appositive clause’,that can also be used in Task 2,especially in the introduction for an opinion essay,where we can identify the topic as:‘,a viewpoint I agree with(for the following reasons)’.
在一个名词的后边加个逗号,紧接着写a/an……,来添加更多的信息。逗号后边的部分叫做:同位语。
同位语在雅思大作文中比较常见,尤其是大作文的介绍段。我公众号的老读者可能会知道,在我写的大作文范文中,在介绍段经常会出现…,a viewpoint I agree with(for the following reasons),这就是一个典型的同位语。
掌握同位语有什么用呢?首先,它可以体现我们的语法多样性;其次,对于基础较弱的同学来说,它最实用的一个功能,就是凑字数啦。
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