避坑！这14种雅思写作的技巧分享
不管是雅思“小白”，还是久经考场的老考鸭，大部分人都觉得写作是雅思考试中最难的部分。
因为除了要学习小作文这种特殊作文的写法，还要积累大作文不同题型结构、相关话题词组、句型和素材。
下面给大家介绍14个雅思写作中一定要避免的写法，想要高分，请一定避免！
1、避免陈词滥调
根据《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》，“cliché”的意思是“a phrase or an idea that has been used so often that it no longer has much meaning and is not interesting”，即，“陈词滥调；陈腐的套话”。
很多时候，这样的“套句”对文章是没有实际意义。
雅思写作中常见的“cliche”包括：
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As we all know that…
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Every coin has two sides.
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It cannot be denied that …
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This is a highly controversial issue about…
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First and foremost, …
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Without doubt …
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There is a heated debate about …
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There are pros and cons …
2、避免缩略词
英语的正式文体规定不能使用缩略词，一定要将其完整形态写出来，比如：
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shouldn’t → should not
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can’t → cannot [中间没有空格]
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don’t → do not
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haven’t → have not
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’ll → will
3、避免性别词汇
这点很容易被大家忽略，以下是一些常见的错误表达及对应的正确表达方法：
❌When a person listens to soft music, he or she will feel relaxed.
✅When people listen to soft music, they will feel relaxed.
❌If men do not start to protect the environment, their lives will be detrimentally impacted.
✅If people do not start to protect the environment, their lives will be detrimentally impacted.
注意：小作文中男女对比的情况下可以使用man/men或woman/women。
4、避免绝对化
雅思写作中的绝对词包括：
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every
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never
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must
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perfect
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best
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worst
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most
以上这些词语尽量不要在写作中使用。
5、避免使用“YOU”
雅思写作中，可以使用人称代词，如：
“I”，“my”，“me”，“mine”，“they”，“them”，“it”，“its”，“their”，“theirs”；
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最好不使用“we”，“us”，“our”，“ours”；
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不能使用“you”，“your”，“yours”。
eg.
❌If governments build railway and subway lines, you will not use your private cars.
✅If governments build railway and subway lines, people will not use their private cars.
6、避免强化词
强化词会使你的观点显得太绝对，不具有信服力。
来看例句↓↓
❌The new neck brace prototype was very promising because of its superb comfort and lean production cost.
✅The new neck brace prototype was promising because of its comfort and lean production cost.
7、避免口语和俚语表达
以下这些口语化表达，不适合于写作这种书面正式文体，所以要避免：
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Last but not the least …
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In a nutshell …
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At the end of the day …
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cost an arm and a leg ..
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kids
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reckon
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a bit
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a lot of/lots of/a couple of
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till
8、避免使用连词断句
像and, but, or 或者 so这种简单的连词，放句子开头显得较口语化，不太正式。
来看看2个例句：
❌Some people believe that living in big cities is harmful to people’s health. But in my opinion, it is not true.
✅Some people believe that living in big cities is harmful to people’s health. In my opinion,however, it is not true.
❌Learning history is beneficial to high school students. So, I think that history should be a compulsory subject in high school.
✅Learninghistory is beneficial to high school students. Therefore, I think that history should be a compulsory subject in high school.
9、避免数字单词混用
在雅思小作文中，十以下的数字（非图中数据）需要写单词。
如：
❌The bar chart illustrates changes in the percentage of university students in 3 countries in Europe.
✅The bar chart illustrates changes in the percentage of students in three countries in Europe.
10、避免粘连句
在雅思写作举例时，很多人都习惯在句子结尾加上“...等等”，以代表丰富性，但其实这种表达是多余的。
eg.
❌Public transport includes vehicles for public use on the roads, airways,waterways, etc.
✅Public transport includes vehicles for public use, such buses, trains and aeroplanes.
❌Nurses must take into consideration patients’ dietary needs resulting from allergies, medication, medical conditions and so on.
✅Nurses must take into consideration patients’ dietary needs resulting from allergies, medication and medical conditions.
11、避免问句
疑问句只能在写作题目中出现，但在你的正式写作中就别出现了。
比如下述这种表达就是不恰当的：
❌Some people believe that males should share housework with females. Is it true?
12、避免引用/谚语/数据
虽然引用和数据能够更有力证明你的观点，但一不小心可能写错，而且雅思考官也可能不了解相关数据，所以不如直接不写。
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According to President Obama, …
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Based on a research project, most males …
13、避免模糊性表达
一些模糊性表达包括：
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things
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stuff
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that kind of thing
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something
这些表达不仅口语化，而且指代不明确，所以也不适合在写作中使用。
14、避免祈使句
一些考生在流程图（flow chart）中使用祈使句，这在雅思写作需要避免，毕竟Task 1也属于学术写作的范畴。
考生可以将祈使句改写为含有被动语态的句子。如：
❌Then, add salt and water into the pot.
✅Then salt and water are added into the pot.
以上的14个应避免的写法，建议大家收藏一下，在平时练习时，写完作文可以拿出来对照一下自己有没有犯以上提到的那些问题。
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