7月1日雅思大作文示范写作 | 通讯科技的利与弊_雅思写作
2023年7月1日雅思大作文题目
With the rapid development of communication technology such as smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2023/07/01)
范文及解析
Introduction
As communication technologies like smart phones and tablets have penetrated into every nook and cranny of the society, people always are phubbing regardless of occasions ranging from travelling on a train to dining at a restaurant, or even strolling. From my own perspective, such electric gadgets, in spite of some dark sides, have brought tangible boons in our daily lives.
解析
典型的科技类考题，论述通讯科技带来的积极消极影响， 整体并没有什么限定信息，难度较小;
every nook and cranny 每个角落;
phubbing v.低头族现象;
tangible adj.明确的，真实的;可触摸的;
boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西;
Body 1
First and foremost, it has become incredibly easy for people to contact each other electronically. Gone are the days when people could only communicate via fixed telephone or writing letters which took several days to reach others. People in modern age can stay connected with family members, friends and colleagues through instant messaging on various social apps to create a more closely-knit bond. Overseas students, for example, can video chat with parents to allay a sense of homesickness. Besides, these electronic devices, in large part, expand people’s social circle. Instead of being confined by physical factors such as geographical distance, people in digital era , due to the pervasive use of mobile phones and the Internet, can get acquainted with more like-minded people who are even living thousands of miles away.
解析
通讯科技的发展带来的好处：
(1) 极大地方便了人与人之间的交流;
(2) 扩大了人们的社交圈;
closely-knit 紧紧结合在一起的
allay vt.减轻;使缓和;使平静
pervasive adj.弥漫的，遍布的
acquainted adj.相识的，认识的;
Body 2
Furthermore, communication technology has revolutionized various industries. It is the mobile apps and online courses that allow people accessible to an assortment of information we are intrigued by, thus augmenting their understanding of subjects and supplementing their studies. In terms of medical care, by remotely monitoring, breathtakingly demanding surgical operations can be successfully performed with pundits with penetrating views. Also, online commerce and transaction, with our job commitment being accomplished by sending emails, discussing business matters or conducting trade transactions online, allow users greater freedom and flexibility.
解析
通讯科技的发展也革新推动了其它各领域的发展：
(1) 使得教育资源的获取更容易;
(2) 医疗资源的共享;
(3) 商业往来的灵活度和自由度;
assortment n.各种各样，混合
augment v.增加，增大;加强
breathtakingly adv.惊人地;
pundit n.专家;博学者;
Body 3
Notwithstanding technological stride, never should we downplay the irreplaceability of face-to-face communication, which is gradually being vitiated by the undue use of the Internet and mobile phones. Without sincere eye-contact, warm handshake or other essential physical cues in front of our interlocutors, the bond of people is very hard to be tightened and the dearth of trust gradually emerges among people. By this token, digital interaction, depriving people of real face-to-face exchange, is prone to deteriorate our relationship with beloved family members or neighbors in the vicinity, which will occasion human indifference as well as a strong feeling of alienation.
解析
通讯科技的发展也带来造成了一定的问题，最明显的就是对于人们社交能力的影响：
notwithstanding prep.虽然，尽管
stride n.进展，进步;
downplay v.对……轻描淡写;轻视，贬低
vitiate vt.损害，弄坏;
undue adj.不适当的，过分的;
dearth n.缺乏;
deteriorate v.恶化，变坏
Conclusion
To recapitulate, in spite of the downsides brought by state-of-the-art communication technology, the modern digital technology , as long as it is properly harnessed, is still of great avail both in our life and work.
解析
总结前文
recapitulate vi.概括;重述要点;
state-of-the-art adj.进的;达到水准的
harnessed v.控制并利用;
avail n.效用，利益
