雅思范文赏析：艺术家的自由_雅思写作
以下北京爱思学雅思培训小编为大家搜集的雅思范文赏析是关于"艺术家的自由"的话题，通过对雅思写作范文的赏析，考生们可以背下关键词、经典句型变为己用：
Creative artists should be given freedom to express their ideas (words, pictures, music and films. However some people think government should take some restriction with them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.
The responsibility of an artist is to create artworks to cater for people’s needs for aesthetics and enjoyment. Some masterpieces by the world-renowned artists like Shakespeare, the greatest poet in British literature; Vinci, the most famous Italian painter, architect and sculptor impress the people around the world deeply. From my point of view, the government should not give restrictions to artists. On the contrary, their creativity and innovation should be encouraged.
Creativity is the source of arts. The development of literature is a very vivid illustration. From Classicism to Romanticism, from Renaissance to Realism, from Humanity to Post-modernism, all the styles of literature reflect people’s thinking and have epoch-making significance. Suppose there were only one style of literature, people would not appreciate so abundant poetry and novels and our world would become so monotonous.
Furthermore, restrictions on creativity will arouse tragedies, one of which is “Burn books and bury the literati in pits” in Chinese history launched by Emperor Qin Shihuang, who buried the Confucian scholars alive and prohibited the dissemination of Confucian. Another tragedy was started by Emperor Yongzheng in the Qing Dynasty, who killed many creative artists and intellectuals, undermining the literal development and distorting the development of humanity. History proves that only when a government encourages people to express their own idea and thought freely, can its country make progress and prosper.
Finally, I will quote a classic sentence from a famous article entitled “Give me liberty or give me death” by Patrick Henry, the greatest writer in American history, “I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty or give me death!”
雅思作文写作技巧：
1、备考的同学们至少要把作文题细致地分析过一遍，在话题内容、结构框架、文字素材方面进行全面归纳。
2、考生练习时务必保证在规定时间内完成作文。避试时短路或紧张，导致崩盘。
3、考生切记纸上谈兵，要动笔写。写完后更要认真重读修改，有条件的可以找老师或其他英语水平较好的人修改并提建议，在修改的过程中发现错误，下次写作时可以改正，写作能力。
4、虽然选入书中的原题不可能再完全一样地重现考场，但书后附上的考官范文和带有细致点评的考生例文都是有价值的。
5、试着把考官的范文翻译成中文，再以自己的思路和语言由中文重新翻译改写成英文，在语言转换的过程中体会中英两种语言在结构、用词、逻辑上的异同，寻找自己在写作中常犯的错误或影响表达的中式英语，语言的准确度。
