都在这里!你可能犯的雅思写作常见错误
许多考生的雅思写作N刷都是5.5分,始终上不了6分。一个很重要的原因就是语法错误太多,但是自己写完的作文自己又容易看不出语法错误?
今天,小编给同学们盘点一下雅思写作六大常见语法错误,快来自查吧
主谓不一致
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
❌错误句子:When one have money,he can do what he want to.
✍错误原因:one是第三人称单数,因此本句的have应改为has;want应改为wants,本句是典型的主谓不一致。
⭕应改为:When one has money,he can do what he wants(to do).
句子不完整
在雅思口语中,交际双方可借助手势、语气、上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解。
可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常在主句写完以后,又想加些补充说明时发生。
❌错误句子:There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV,radio,newspaper and soon.
✍错误原因:本句后半部分"For example by TV,radio,newspaper and soon.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
⭕应改为:There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.
词性误用
词性的误用即词性混淆,不能恰当运用不同词性。
❌错误句子:None can negative the importance of money.
✍错误原因:negative系形容词,误作动词。
⭕应改为:None can deny the importance of money.
指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。
❌错误句子:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
✍错误原因:读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词所指代的对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。
⭕应改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
不间断句子
这个错误的出现受中文意识的影响很大。很多同学在写句子时,句子之间缺乏有效的连接成分。甚至,有的句子写得比较中式化。
❌错误句子:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
✍错误原因:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
⭕应改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world./There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
过于累赘
写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。
❌错误句子:In spite of the fact that he is lazy,I like him.
✍错误原因:本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”
⭕应改为:In spite of his laziness,I like him.
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