避免这些雅思写作常见错误
好多宝宝和津津反应,雅思写作一直卡在5.5分,怎么也上不了6分。其实有个很重要的原因就是语法错误太多了,今天,让我们一起盘点一下在雅思写作中常见语法错误吧!看看你中招了没有?
雅思写作中的常见语法错误
01
主谓不一致
这里的不一致也不光是指主谓不一致,也包括了数、时态以及代词的不一致等。
eg.
❌错误表达:When one have money,he can do what he want to.
❗错误点:句子中one是第三人称单数,因此本句的have应改为has;want应改为wants,这就是典型的主谓不一致。
⭕正确表达:When one has money,he can do what he wants(to do).
02
句子表达不完整节
要是雅思口语,那么表达不完整的句子,可以借助手势、语气、上下文让人理解。但书面表达可不一样,句子结构的不完整会使句子表达不清,一般会在主句已经写完后,又补充说明时发生这种情况。
eg.
❌错误表达:There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV,radio,newspaper and soon.
❗错误点:上述后半部分"For example by TV,radio,newspaper and soon.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
⭕正确表达:There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.
03
指代不清
指代词与被指代的人或者物关系不清,也指句子先后所用的代词不一致。
eg.
❌错误表达:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
❗错误点:以上的句子会让读者无法清楚判断两位姑娘中是谁要结婚,谁将当伴娘。
⭕正确表达:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
04
词性误用
指的是词性混淆,不恰当的运用不同词性
eg.
❌错误表达:None can negative the importance of money.
❗错误点:negative是个形容词,这里被误作了动词。
⭕正确表达:None can deny the importance of money.
05
不间断句子
这个其实是受中文意识的影响。好多同学在写句子时,句子与句子之间缺乏有效的连接。甚至,句子写得比较中文化。
eg.
❌错误表达:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
❗错误点:该句中“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”。包含了两层完整的意思,简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
⭕正确表达:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
或There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
06
过于累赘
好多宝宝为了凑字数,写的句子那叫一个繁琐,一篇好多文章没有一个多余的词;写段落也没有一个无必要的句子。
eg.
❌错误表达:In spite of the fact that he is lazy,I like him.
❗错误点:这里的“the fact that he is lazy”是同谓语从句,我们秉持着能用词组的就不用从句可以这样写。
⭕正确表达:In spite of his laziness,I like him.
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