雅思小作文柱状图最强提分指南

发表时间:2023-03-10 16:36:30

柱图虽然特别多,但是我们总结一下,其实柱图就两种:一种是有时间变化的柱图,也可以称为动态图,另一种是没有时间变化的柱图,我们称为静态图。

01.

我们用2022年的雅思小作文真题为例

下面这些图就是动态柱图:

这里强调一下,有年龄变化的图也属于动态图,因为年龄的变化也是时间的变化一种,和这种情况一样的还有,表示四季的变化呀,旅游淡季和旅游旺季的对比。动态的柱图的结构:

    • 开头段(改写题目)
    • 上升趋势的分对象写一段
    • 下降趋势的分对象写一段
    • 结尾段(总结一下大小和差值)

例文:The bar chart shows how the share of the total productions in Europe, Asia and the rest of the world changed during the period from 1840 and 2000.Asia and Europe produced less production over the span. It is clear that Asia took up the largest proportion of world productions in 1840 (more than 50%) However, in 2000, it reduced to the second largest figure, at around 43%. In 1984, Europe created the second most productions in the world, with 38%. A moderate increase could be found to 45% in 1880. Then it kept a dramatic decrease to 23% in 2000, when it became the country producing the least.On the other hand, there was an opposite situation in the rest of the world. Its production was the lowest in the starting year, occupying only 13%. After that, the production in the rest of world showed a growth to nearly 40% in 2000, exceeding that in Asia.Overall, the gap in the share of world production among the three countries was narrow.

02.

下面这些柱图是没有时间变化的

属于静态柱图

静态的柱图的结构:

    • 开头段(改写题目)
    • A比B大的写一段
    • A比B小的写一段
    • 结尾段(总结一下差值)

例文:The bar chart shows the proportion of men and women who taught in seven different faculties of a particular university in 2012.More women than men chose to become teachers in Arts, Education and Medicine. Education was dominated by female academics, with nearly 80%, three times more than the percentage of male counterparts (22%).However, in medicine, gender representation was almost equal, with 52% and 50% respectively.On the other hand, The subjects in Business, Engineering, Law and Science had more male staff members. There was the largest gender disparity in engineering. Notably, 85% of the engineering teacher were male and only 15% female. It is interesting to note that Law and Science had the same proportion of men and women, with 60% male and 40% female academics. Business faculty employed only 10% more male teachers than female teachers.Overall, Education and Engineering showed the obvious gender difference, while other subjects were more balanced in their composition.