20230805雅思大作文范文分析- 废品材料回收- 提炼报告类文章模版

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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials(e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

类型： 报告类

话题： 社会类-环境保护

翻译： 

一些国家对于如纸张、玻璃、金属罐等废品的回收不够充分，你认为原因是什么，如何才能解决这一问题

题目分析

可能很多小烤鸭对于废品材料是否被充分回收并不是很了解，因此拿到这个题目时多少有些无从下笔，那么咱们先来简单分析一下废物材料处理问题，再去看范文

大家都在小区里、街道里看到过五颜六色垃圾桶，政府也一直在倡导大家垃圾分类

可回收垃圾，一般就是回收后加工又可以利用的物品，包括废纸、塑料、玻璃、金属等，这些垃圾会有在回收分选中心制作成再生资源，如钢材、再生纸等

可是当我们没有按照垃圾分类指示去分类垃圾或者当这些垃圾没有被回收中心有效筛取时，就会出现not enough recycling的情况

Many recyclables become contaminated when items are placed in the wrong bin, or when a dirty food container gets into the recycling bin.

Contamination can prevent large batches of material from being recycled. Other materials can’t be processed in certain facilities.

说到原因，从个人层面，人们可能对于废品材料回收处理的重要性并没有深入了解。 

人们都喜欢简单、方便、省力的方式，垃圾分类需要动手动脑，如果并不理解重要性，那么为什么不选择简单一点，都装一起直接扔一个桶里呢？ （no need to put in the extra effort/ People think that it does not make a difference, so they don’t bother to do it.)

从社会层面上讲，垃圾分类政策法规不健全,导致垃圾分类投放行为不具有很强的约束力。公司、个人都有很大的空间不按规定执行

好啦，先分析这些，相信小伙伴们对题目有了一定的理解和想法啦，接下来咱们一起来看今天的范文

范文分析

In many nations, it is evident that waste materials like paper, glass, and aluminium cans are not recycled to create a new product. Several countries are of the opinion that recycling is a complete waste of time and money. In this essay, I will briefly expose the reasons and point out the initiatives that must be adopted to motivate people to recycle.

开头段：背景介绍+下文引出

好句：结尾句为可套用的模版： 

In this essay, I will briefly expose the reasons and point out initiatives that must be adopted to .....（引出原因和措施） 

Many people do not recycle because of various reasons. There is a lack of understanding about recycling and its implications among the general public. Despite the fact a majority of people are unaware of how recycling works, they are at least concerned about where their garbage ends up. Moreover, many of them usually find it difficult to act responsibly or take care of such matters since they are busy with their own lives. People are not interested in making the extra effort. In addition, recycling is perceived as a waste of energy. The fuel used by recycling trucks to move waste materials around is cited as being costly. It is sometimes more expensive to dispose of the trash in the recycling industry.

原因段： 作者给出了三条原因

1. 从认知上：公众对于废品回收重要性的理解不足

2. 从行为上：人们工作繁忙，很难腾出时间来分类垃圾

3. 社会层面： 废品材料回收费钱费力

好句： Despite the fact a majority of people are unaware of ... they are at least concerned about ...

尽管人们没有意识到...他们至少对于...是关心的

例句： 尽管很多人没有意识到肥胖带来的健康风险，他们至少对于自己的外形还是在意的。

Despite the fact a majority of people are unaware of the health hazard from obesity, they are at least concerned about their body image. 

Numerous measures can be taken in order to rectify the above issue. A few lessons about the benefits of reprocessing can be added to high school curriculums to encourage citizens to take responsibility from an early age. Furthermore, governments need to host forums where the recycling process can be explained to people. The importance of waste reduction can be promoted viaTV, newspapers, and billboards to improve the environment and encourage community participation.

措施段： 一个措施为学校教育，一个为社会教育

各位小伙伴注意这一段很重要，这两条措施，大家会发现在各种报告类文章中都是通用的，犯罪类、环境类、工作压力类、儿童教育类，都可以在给政策时用到学校教育和社会教育的点 

本段中大橘划线斜体的点，大家记下来哦，考场上直接套

In conclusion, recycling waste goods is mandatory for all nationalities to reduce their environmental impact. By conducting different campaigns（活动）, the administration should improve the public’s awareness about recycling.

结尾段：总结概括

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提炼报告类模版：

开头段： 

It is evident that +社会问题. In this essay, I will briefly expose the reasons and point out the initiatives that must be adopted to +要解决的问题

原因段：

Many people do not +问题  because of various reasons. Firstly，原因1 . Moreover, 原因2  In addition, 原因3 

措施段：

Numerous measures can be taken in order to rectify the above issue. A few lessons about +需要解决的问题 can be added to high school curriculums to encourage citizens to take responsibility from an early age. Furthermore, governments need to host forums. The importance of ...can be promoted viaTV, newspapers, and billboards to improve the environment and encourage community participation.

结尾段： 

In conclusion, 总结上文. By conducting different campaigns, the administration should improve....

好啦以上为今天的范文分析，希望对大家有所帮助哦