22/7雅思写作真题观点详解——交通

发表时间:2023-07-24 10:49:46

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or motor-bikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有些人认为提高驾驶汽车或摩托车的最低法定年龄是改善道路安全的最佳途径。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这个观点?

这是我们上课用来讲含极端词(the best, the only)类型的例题。

所以上过课的同学几乎是考到原题。

以下是大家可以考虑切入的角度

Lack of correlation/association: The relationship between age and driving skill or responsible behaviour on the road is not straightforward. Some young drivers may be very responsible and skilled, while some older drivers may exhibit risky behaviour.

缺乏相关性:年龄与驾驶技能或道路上的负责行为之间的关系并不直接。有些年轻驾驶员可能非常负责和熟练,而有些老年驾驶员可能表现出冒险行为。

Graduated/stepwise licensing systems: Many countries already have graduated licensing systems in place, which gradually introduce young drivers to different driving conditions and impose restrictions on them until they gain enough experience. Simply increasing the age limit might not be as effective as enhancing these systems.

分级驾驶许可制度:许多国家已经实施了分级驾驶许可制度,逐步让年轻驾驶员熟悉不同的驾驶条件,并对他们实施限制,直到他们获得足够的经验。仅仅增加年龄限制可能没有增强这些制度那样有效。

Other/additional risk factors: Road safety is influenced by various factors like speeding, distracted driving, driving under the influence, and road infrastructure. Addressing these issues comprehensively may have a more significant impact on reducing accidents.

其他风险因素:道路安全受到诸多因素的影响,如超速、分神驾驶、酒后驾驶和道路基础设施。全面解决这些问题可能对减少事故有更显著的影响。

Social and economic implications/ socioeconomic consequences: Raising the minimum driving age might inconvenience families and individuals who rely on young drivers for transportation, particularly in rural or remote areas.

社会和经济影响:提高最低驾驶年龄可能会给依赖年轻驾驶员进行交通的家庭和个人带来不便,尤其是在农村或偏远地区。

Public transportation limitations/limitation in public transportation: In areas with limited public transportation options, raising the minimum driving age could hinder people's mobility and access to essential services.

公共交通限制:在交通选择有限的地区,提高最低驾驶年龄可能会妨碍人们的出行和获得基本服务。

Focus/emphasis on technology and education: Investing in advanced safety technologies in vehicles and promoting road safety education could be more effective in reducing accidents than solely relying on age restrictions.

专注于科技和教育:投资于车辆先进安全技术并推广道路安全教育,可能比仅仅依靠年龄限制更有效地减少事故。

这里也给大家一些背景句改写的列子:

Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or motor-bikes.

= Certain people argue that increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes is the optimal method to improve road safety.

= There are those who maintain that elevating the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes is the best solution to enhance road safety.

= There are those who advocate for the idea that raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes is the optimal solution to enhance road safety.

= A common viewpoint is that by increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes, road safety can be significantly improved.

= A viewpoint often expressed is that by raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes, road safety can be significantly improved.

= Some individuals believe that enhancing road safety can be achieved by raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes.

= Some argue that the most effective approach to improve road safety is by increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or motorbikes.